Wednesday, December 12, 2007

~*~POEM~*~

Eating makes me feel I'm fat,
every time I eat something I want to throw up.
I look in the mirror I see another me.

A Person, a stranger, a monster,
a person full of confusion inside,
not being able to tell what I want.
A person that's fat in the inside,
skinny on the outside.

A person, a stranger, a monster,
a stranger I don't want to meet,
to scared to see my body die.
As days pass, i see the darkest come by,
that day my body cannot go on.

A person, a stranger, a monster,
I can hear the monster call me,
telling me your fat,
look at those big tights, at fatty chicks.
I try to ignore the monster, but it
follows me the whole time.

5 comments:

giggles_magee said...

ANALY!!! this takes a step into anothers shoes which is GREAT!!! i think its wonderful that you took the time to think what it would be like to be in anothers shoes.... Especially one who has a "monster" called "anorexia or belimia"

Crisol Tellez said...

O My God i LOVE your poem it realy got to me! It realy gives a message

D@!$Y said...

Wow... great poem... The form in which the poem was written makes it easier for the reader to understand the feelings of the person.... B-E-A-U-TI-FUL!!!

mario said...

I like your poem

~*.:shorty:.*~ said...

wow me gusta mucho tu poem!!! i feel like u really got the message out there. good job!